DRAFT FEEDBACK

I did not have any written feedback from the draft, it was all verbal. I was told that I was too static with the camera and that I should move it around a little bit more, and also have more shots with faster cutting. This would enable my video to look more realistic instead of being slow pace like it was in my draft. I was also advised by one of my teachers to look at a previous students video and take inspiration from it (see below). It contains a lot of fast cuts and the little space which the director has the use is used superbly. The shots of the instruments and the shots of the head only being 3/4 in the shot are something which I will try to emulate in my final music video.

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DIGIPAK INSPIRATION 3

This cover is also minimalist/simplistic. From just looking at this cover one would not be able to tell what genre it would fit in - and this is what I like about it. I am a fan of just 2 colours being in place again, this time none of them being black however - they are clearly Orange and White. I will try and emulate just 2 colours being in place on mine. I quite like the 'Parental Advisory Explicit Content' in the bottom right however I don't feel it would fit my genre - as mine is more hip-hop. I like the size of the text on this album cover but in mine I will try and move it down slightly so it is more central as I feel this looks better.

DIGIPAK INSPIRATION 2

Kasabian are a band which I admire greatly and this album cover was very striking when it was first released. It caught people off guard with it being so simplistic. I feel that the black works very well with the pink. Well... black works with everything. I used pink in my draft, this was inspired by this however I feel that it didn't work aswell. I like the text being central - in my final digipak I will emulate this - as I don't like the text being on one side and the cover looking lopsided. I will also have the text larger as well as I do not feel that is is prominent enough in this.

DIGIPAK INSPIRATION

The colours on this Digipak inspired me the most, although I do like the minimalist design as well. I feel that yellow and black work really well and this is something which I would like to incorporate in my final digipak and maybe even the advertisement as well. I used these colours in my AS media magazine last year and this was marked highly therefore it is clear that they can work together. I am a fan of the picture on the front of this album cover however I am no sure whether I will use this as inspiration on not. On mine I also want the text to be in a more prominent place.